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Sagar Diamond

Sagar Diamond


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Join date : 2009-10-09
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PostSubject: Sagar Diamond: The Kidou Corps Commander   Sagar Diamond: The Kidou Corps Commander I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 03, 2009 7:28 pm

Basic Character Info
Name: Sagar Diamond

Age: 100

Visual Age: 13

Gender: Male

Division: Kidou Corps

Appearance: Still in his youth, Sagar is quite attractive. He is slim body-wise yet muscular. He has brown hair and deep light-blue/purple eyes. Sagar Diamond has no scars mainly because his opponents have never have been strong enough to critically hurt him. For a general outview on what my character looks like, my avatar is a good example.

Personality: Sagar Diamond is well-respected and highly honorable, and always treats those around him with respect, even those who are weaker or not as highly ranked as he is. Additionally Sagar Diamond is very wise and is known to be one of the smartest people in the whole Soul Society. As a result, he can be easily approached by other members of Soul Society who seek favors or advice. Due to his high moral code, Sagar will never let any harm come to either his underlings or those who attempt to protect them. He refuses to give up when he believes something is wrong and will break a rule to do what is right. He has the ability to correctly judge people's character and knows when they are lonely. Sagar always maintains a level of honor and integrity when engaging in battle. He refuses to fight in the presence of a child or even with a child, even if that child is a Hollow. He always maintains a semblance of respect for his opponent and is polite in combat situations. He also has a high measure of mercy; rather actually try to teach the enemy how to be a better fighter. Ultimately, since he is still young however, he is not serious all the time and will happen to have as much fun as he can.

Background/RP Sample

Background: On the bright day of January 1, the start of another year for Shinigami, Sagar was born to the Noble Family Diamond. Sagar was known as a polite, obedient boy during his childhood. Since he was a Noble, he was taught to have skills that did not apply to most other children. One of the many was to make sure he was dressed appropriately for every occasion or else he would have been punished severely. Life was not so perfect for the little boy. For once, since he was a Noble, he did not have any friends. His life was so constricted that he had needed guards whenever he went places. As time went on, Sagar realized that he did not prefer this lifestyle. He wanted to be part of the Gotei 13 and one day, he knew that he would be one…

Years past and at age 50, he was ready for begin his journey. He had been training for 5 years now, years enough for one person to just learn how to crawl. Sagar was willing to learn since he had always had that passion. Three years ago, his doctor told him that his reautsi was enormous and that his power was pretty strong for his age. Ever since then, he had been training, each and every day learning how to become stronger…

He entered the massive building known as the Spiritual Arts Academy by most. Sagar glanced at the herd of people, coming and going, eager to get to their classes. Sagar had been quite fortunate, his hard work paying off. Sagar had tried out for the exams and found out that he ranked first in the number of students who tried out. Sagar had skipped to Year Three and in First Class, even then…

Sixth months passed by that were when Sagar knew that he was gifted. He was gifted at every aspect of a Shinigami and Sagar was soaring though the Shinigami Academy. One day, a special guest came to talk with Sagar. He was known as the Kidou Corps Fifth Seat by a selective few. Sagar had been brought to a room and told to show the man his Kido skills. Sagar was apparently successful since in the next week, he found out that got admitted in the prestigious Kidou Corps. The Kidou Corps was a secret organization in Soul Society known for their mastery in Kido…

Sagar had trained under the Kido Corps for 15 years now learning various Kido and achieving 3rd seat. Sagar was known to be very strong which he felt proud of. Sagar one day found out that he had achieved Shikai.

35 years later, when Sagar was Vice-Captain of the Kidou Corps, Sagar’s well-known Captain vanished. Everyone in the Squad thought that their Captain had died but in reality, that was not the case. Sagar had one day overheard the Captains talking. In their conversation, it was announced that Sagar’s Captain had been transferred to the Zero Division. Known to be the highest Division in charge of protecting the King, Sagar was thrilled that his Captain was worthy enough to go so far…

Only three weeks later, Sagar learned his Bankai making him eligible to become the Captain of the Kidou Corps…


RP Sample: The Most Important Days at the Spiritual Arts Academy - Sagar entered the Spiritual Arts Academy passing many students. I still can't wait until I become a Shinigami and fight for the Gotei 13. Sagar saw his class, First Class, and entered the room. Many of the students stared at Sagar glaring at him. They are just jealous, just go to your seat.

The teacher came in, a young man with blond hair. Looking at him, Sagar noted that the man had a really high amount of spiritual energy. Finally, someone that actually can teach us. Hello class, my name is Denkou Ukitake. Yes, I am a descendant of the great Jūshirō Ukitake. So then, let me introduce and tell you guys about myself. I am a member of the Thirteenth Division and I am a seated member. The reason why I am here is because of the craziness in Soul Society these days, the Gotei 13 has assigned me as the instructor of this class. I am very glad to be working with you guys and hope that we can have a great year together. Do you guys have any questions to ask me? So then, I decided that we would do something extremely exciting today. I gathered up information about this class and it says that you guys have not been taught to fight yet. So, I was thinking that we would take a couple hours to train in Kido and then Shunpo. Remember, today is going to be difficult and results may not happen so quickly. So then, let us start. Every one in the class was so excited and ready to start to learn how to fight. Sagar knew that getting his sword just two days ago will benefit him greatly in the future. Everyone exited the class and headed out to the Kido Training Grounds. The grounds were made especially for Kido so for sparring you had to go to the training grounds. The entire class was pumped to start there lesson for today.

The class entered the Kido Training Grounds and formed a line behind the first person. Sagar was 13th in the line and knew that number would help him. As you may or may not know, the Thirteenth Division is well-versed in Kido. That gives me the upper hand when teaching you guys because you guys will actually be able to do it. I will only teach you up to Hado #34 and Bakudo #34 since I am only allowed to teach you guys that far. Now then, for this class, I have picked out 12 Kido spells which you will be learning throughout just these couple of weeks. We will be learning 7 Bakudo and 5 Hado. Now I know this is going to be difficult but I know that you guys are all talented. Remember, this is going to be a bit annoying and hard-working, you must go fast, but in the end, you will realize that it was worth it. Now shall we start? Now, does anyone know that Kido means? Sagar raised his hand widely so that the teacher would pick on him. The teacher did indeed pick Sagar and Sagar started to explain it. "Kidō is the technique that Shinigami use to focus their Spiritual Energy into magic spells of various powers," Sagar said proudly. Yes, that is indeed correct. Good job for knowing what Kido is. So then, the first Kido we are going to learn is Hado #1 Shō. This Kido is not too difficult and can essentially be learned in a day if you are focused. Though, after that, you must practice to make the Kido stronger. So, Hado #1 Shō simply pushes the opponent away from the caster. This may seem as though it really is useless. No it is not, with a great weilder, you can you tremendous force. For example... Denkou demonstrated the Kido. He didn't even need to use its incantation, and suddenly, Sagar felt this increasing energy. Out of nowhere a increasing circle of energy surrounded the front of Denkou's hand. The power of such a simple Kido was amazing. The Kido hit the dummy and the dummy was forced to collide with the wall and even made a crack in it. Wow, that Kido was amazing, I can't believe I just saw that. So then, let's start training. Every person will say the incantation and focus on the Kido and about hitting the dummy. I have 17 dummies set up for each student. By three o'clock, all of you should be able to perform the Kido and make the dummy hit the wall with some force. You guys have five hours from now so good luck. All the students went to there dummies and began their practice...

Sagar was excited to hear the news. He went right to his station and began working. Now then, let me start learning this Kido. After saying the proper incantation, Sagar tried the Kido. Sagar's arm suddenly flew up. The pressure of the Kido was more than he had expected. Here, let me help you there. Sagar saw that his instructor stood next to him inspecting on Sagar's technique. You are not concentrating enough, that is why the Kido is so random. Also, remember that Kido is powerful, so be careful. Lastly, you must concentrate so you can lock your opponent properly. Sagar listened to his instructor carefully so that he would know what to do. Once Denkou was done, Sagar began his training once again. Sagar focused real carefully on his opponent. After Sagar said the incantation, Sagar saw a circle of energy still emitting and collecting energy from the surroundings. Sagar screamed the Kido and saw the result. Nothing happened! Great job, Sagar. Even though, you did not complete the entire Kido, it was a great start. You have plenty of time to prefect it. To tell you the truth, you have great potential. I have say to you that I was not as brilliant as you when I was your age. So, keep trying. Sagar was shocked by the teacher's words. His words were so inspirational. I can't believe that I have such an amazing teacher. He is so nice to me and the other students. He said he was in the Thirteenth Division. Well, I think that it will be perfect for me too since I love Kido and I am amazing in fighting too. Sagar began concentrating to try to accomplish his task on learning the Kido.

Five hours later, Sagar was extremely tired. He knew that his spiritual energy was dramatically low. Last shoot before Kido training is over. Hopefully this can be my best one. Sagar stated the incantation and said the name of the Kido. Suddenly, a thick circle formed around his hand still sapping spiritual energy. Sagar felt a thrust against him and the dummy flew. The impact was so strong that the worn dummy cracked the wall and then exploded. The straws of the dummy flew everywhere and especially on Sagar. Sagar released the powerful Kido and relaxed. He felt a bit dizzy from the amount of spiritual energy taken for using the Kido. Sagar went to his instructor and said that he could perform the Kido. Good job Sagar, I knew you could do it. As you continue practicing the Kido, you will realize that it will start getting easier. You must have a lot of spiritual energy to do this, but then you can just say the name of the Kido without the incantation. Remember that and don't forget about it. If you want to learn more about that, once you have improved, remind me to show you. Now then, you relax with the rest of the students since you were the last one, though that Kido you just did was amazing. In about an hour, we will start learning Shunpo. Now go and tell everyone to meet me in the Training Grounds, not here. Sagar briskly walked and told the other students. Sagar badly needed to rest to increase his spiritual energy but was excited to finally be able to learn Shunpo. Sagar exited the Kido Training Grounds and went directly to the Training Grounds. I wonder what Shunpo is like. Hopefully it is not as difficult to learn as Kido was. I am definitely exhausted from all the work. I need to rest fast. Thirteenth Division here I come. Though, I need to take the Final Exams which obviously is going to be difficult. Sagar entered the Training Grounds and laid on the ground, resting until it was time for the Shunpo lesson.
Shunsui walks in a room seeing another academy student laying down. So, he walks over and says "Hey, my name is Kyoraku Shunsui. Nice to meet you.". Shunsui could tell by looking at him he was exhausted. Then, Shunsui pulls his dual zanpaktou out from his sash and sits next to the other student with them resting on his shoulder. Shunsui looks up and stares at the ceiling for a second before directing his attention back at the student. Shunsui sits in the class awaiting a reply and the teacher to arrive and scold him for missing classes today.
Sagar sat in the warm grass filled ground in the Training Ground. Breathing heavily, Sagar started to relax. Kido is extremely exhausting, but still it was worth the effort. I loved learning it and the teacher saw potential in me. Now, I wish it could be the same with Shunpo. Hopefully, everything goes well. Also, I wish the teacher will continue being impressed with my abilities. I want to show him that I am capable. Maybe, he could even teach me about sword training and learning to communicate with my sword. Sagar gazed in the sky, relaxing while looking at the wandering clouds.

As Sagar woke up, the instructor arrived. Sagar stood up as the rest of the class did too. Everyone greeted the teacher and waited for his lecture. Hello class and welcome back. Aside from that, let's begin learning Shunpo today which is a part of Hohō. So then, who knows what Hohō is? Also, what is Shunpo? A kid replied saying that Hohō is an important skill for most Shinigami, and is very similar to the Sonído used by Arrancar. It enables Shinigami to walk on air using spiritual power. By collecting and solidifying Reaitsi beneath their feet, Shinigami can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. The kid further explained that Shunpo is a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. Good job, you gave a wonderful response to my two questions. Now, we will be learning how to Shunpo today moving from one place to another. Later in the year, we will be learning techniques such as walking on the air and eventually Senka and Utsusemi. Now then, I will explain for just a couple of minutes on how I have set up the training. You each have a point A and B in your area. You must be able to reach to point B from point A with as little as steps possible. I have recorded the number of steps to be 100 with each foot as a step if a person was to walk from point A to point B. The less steps it takes you, the farther better you are in knowing Shunpo. You will be recorded each number of steps it takes you to me once you are done. For me, it takes me 5 steps, but I am not proficient in Shunpo then some others in my Squad. Now, the way to learn Shunpo is quite simple. You gather reausti in your feet and almost burst from the reautsi. This will take a lot of training but it is fairly simple. Good luck and get started with your training.

Okay then, let's see how good I am at Shunpo. Sagar focused his reautsi under his feet. He could feel pressure exterting out of him. Sagar suddenly felt as though something sprang and indeed Sagar went forward what not as he intented. Sagar did a flip in the air and landed on his back. Sagar saw that Denkou came up to him. Wow, that must have hurt. Be careful that you control your reautsi. I see that you exherted too much too quickly. Now get up and start that Shunpo. Sagar listened to his teacher's words and immediatly stood up. Sagar restarted his Shunpo stance. Focus Sagar on making sure you don't exhert too much too quickly. Suddenly, Sagar felt as though a sudden burst hit his back. Sagar flew up in the air. Sagar landed again seeing that he moved two feet. Oh wow, I actually moved! I finally learned how to begin learning how to do Shunpo. Sagar began to focus again and again moved two feet. Sagar continued this until he got to the 100 feet mark. Sagar went to his instructor and told him the number of steps he had taken. Sagar continued to do this and on his fifth time he reported his results. "Denkou, I have taken 25 steps to get to Point B," said Sagar. Good job Sagar on your accomplishment. That is a lot better than most of the students. I hope you will continue to improve and continue to show your ability to learn. Okay class, I think that class is just about over. I hope you had a good time learning Kido and Shunpo. Tommorow, we will continue this same lesson and by the end of tommorow, you should be able to fully be able to perform Hado #1 with almost ease. Also, we will continue learning Shunpo and I hope guys will get better. So then, off you go to the hostal. Remember to get a good night rest. You deserve it from all that work you showed me today. I had a wonder day with you guys. Bye now and see you soon.

Sagar headed off tired from the hard work. This class is so much better now. I hope we can continue doing such trilling materials in class. My teacher is so nice and I am improving greatly. Sagar walked out the doors of the Training Ground. He proceeded to go back to the hostal and enjoy a wonderful sleep...

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Sagar Diamond
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